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:iconmiikichandesuu:
Hi ; A ; this is my first critique, i really hope its not too harsh...

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Anyways, I think the overall looks okay but I suggest you to keep practicing on!

1.- Face definition: Try making the head and chin a bit wider as well as a wee bit more pointed. The eyes look as if they were almost stuck together, try doing them far apart. Also, try to do the neck a bit skinnier

2.- Anatomy: The proportion between torso and legs are really good, just try to do the hips slimmer and the legs a bit more skinnier. Also, the arms are a bit too skinny, and do them just a bit longer.

3.- Outfit: I really love the outfit <3 Just put a bit more movement in them! <3 make the bows moving, give them more detail

4.- Coloring: There are parts where the lighting and blush is AWESOME <3 But I think you should put more bold shadows in parts where theyre mostly obvious to see (Like below the chest or in the hair) to give it more movement~

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I'm really sorry if it was hard, again. I really dont mean to hurt your feelings or anything //sobs

In any case, you can improve by looking at tutorials here or in those awesome how-to-draw manga books (I dont know if you have in your country ;A ; )

Thanks for reading!
~MiikiChanDesuu
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:iconghostkillar:
GhostKillar Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks for doing your critique! ^--^
I agree with you, I believe my week spots are in the arms, legs, neck, and eyes
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:iconmiikichandesuu:
MiikiChanDesuu Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
You're welcome dear <3

Just keep practicing them! And youll eventually improve <3
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:iconghostkillar:
GhostKillar Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
indeed,
thank you! QuQ
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:iconmiikichandesuu:
MiikiChanDesuu Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
No problem ; v ; <3
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:iconghostkillar:
GhostKillar Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
;v;
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